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Aftershock by ~Saerah:iconSaerah:

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My lips are still tingling from your kiss.
My fingers still sparking with excitement.
I still feel your silk fingers on my skin,
And your warm gasps in my ear.

My legs are still trembling from your touch.
My body still pushing towards the pleasure.
I daydream about the way your body moved.
And your skin, covered with a layer of sweet tasting sweat.

My hands are still clutching you to me,
My senses are still filled with heaven.
I still smell the electric air,
And your hair. . . Oh, your hair.

My body still feels the carress.
My eyes are still wide with wonder.
I still see my hands as I explore all that you are,
And I'm intoxicated with the sensual aftershock.
©2005-2009 ~Saerah
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Author's Comments

I still feel everything. :sigh: This is pretty personal. I'm a little scared as to what people will think, but then again, I don't really care. All that matters is that I am happy. :nod:

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~Dint May 23, 2005, 12:53:38 AM
... wow. I like it ^^

:+fav:
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^SkippyJr May 23, 2005, 12:57:03 AM
Wow,
That's amazing,
Very touching,
I liked this poem.

--
aka Tzachi Gvaram
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~Ihateverythingaboutu May 23, 2005, 4:57:45 AM
Very exotic, and great, visual imagery. It's like I could close my eyes, and imagine it. Great job!
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~Spitwyld May 23, 2005, 6:30:19 AM
Wonderful! To me, there's nothing more incredible than a piece of writing like yours teeming with affection. I hope you keep letting your mind, heart and soul flow! And when in doubt as to whether you should post something, just giv'er!
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~MistressSnowSpider May 23, 2005, 7:11:33 AM
This is lovely. You convey the feeling well....

....would comment more but I'm shy, so I'll keep that to myself.

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--Mistress SnowSpider--
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~F0rg0ttens0ul May 23, 2005, 7:44:52 AM
Well what can i say? Its another great poem coming from the mind of a wonderful person. Good Job.

:hug: forever.

--
When your thrown a curve ball in life, use your bat to beat the shit out of who ever threw it, lol!
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~Saerah May 23, 2005, 8:32:32 AM
Thank you very much! It was very easy for me to write, but very hard for me to post. I don't want people to think all I write about is sex, etc. It was hard to figure out whether or not it was meaningful or just raunchy. lol.

--
~Saerah

. . . I am the slowest apple picker in all the land.
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~Saerah May 23, 2005, 8:38:13 AM
Thank you very very much. :D

--
~Saerah

. . . I am the slowest apple picker in all the land.
:iconsaerah:
~Saerah May 23, 2005, 8:42:43 AM
Thanks so much!

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~Saerah

. . . I am the slowest apple picker in all the land.
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